Please Show Concern Poem by Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Please Show Concern

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Show Concern
Please put your hand on my heart show concern
My love I am in dire need of touch of yours to say
I am in need of your attention so please do discern
In my dark life my love you are the only light ray

I am in trouble with out you be near and beside
Help me to be in me make me stable in this state
My love, your beauty be together far and wide
My love for you remains wonderfully just so great

Take me don't break me help me remain composed
You are the only hope in this world of cruel rivals
Let your love be frank straightforward and exposed
Be mine openly in all subtle difficulties and trials

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Saturday, March 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2020

Take me don't break me help me remain composed/You are the only hope in this world of cruel rivals....I trace.fathomless poetic depth in this lovely poetic expression! What a great urge! Beautifully put.....10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 March 2020

A brilliant poem on Love has been amazingly shared with thrilling expression. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you dear Col for sharing this beautiful poem with us.10

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