Wednesday, August 12, 2020

Please, Set Me Free Comments

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I was born free.
The world jailed me.
It gave me a name,
A caste, a faith, an aim
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 August 2020

This is very well scripted with a difference and a message 10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2020

very nice.. i loved it.. clear 10 Rise above - Integration Saturday,15th August 2020 it is our country and we take the pledge to defend the border's boundary it shall be our endeavour to live and die for honour Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Kevin Patrick 14 August 2020

Exceptionally prescient observations, we are animals driven to destructive creeds born from social construction. So glad this poem was chosen. Great write.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 August 2020

Excellent poem. Very true for many peoples of the world

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

(....) The world is safety palace for human Human born free But everywhere chained by wild and vengeance teeth Everywhere the rules, regulations, creeds, cultures, scriptures Made by the opportunist human The hypocrite human governs the whole By the name of so called gods, helI, heaven And makes victim of slaughter each other So if human wanna feeedom from this havoc clutch Then everyone needs to know him/herself Needs to awake the true conscience of humanity

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

This is the earth Beautiful garden of nature Human born free In the time of human (part of nature) There are no religion, creed, constitution, frontier, culture.... But the greedy predecessor names, teaches rules and regulations According to own creed, ism and Spreads the venomous hatred (....)

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

Please, set me free. I hate to be mild. Return me to the wild. Society turned me bad. Wilderness will make me glad.....great write to human character with the philosophical rhythm to set the whole world free fron cruel clutch of man made construction; congrats for being selected this poem as POD.... Deserves 10++

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Erin Cowart 14 August 2020

What a beautiful poem. When we can all accept that the supposed differences between us are just conditions placed on us by society at birth then maybe we can make a way for the world to live at peace.

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Varsha M 14 August 2020

A very beautifully penned expressive work. Very true Pictorizing of freedom and bondage. Congratulations for being selected as POD.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 August 2020

Please, set me free. I hate to be mild. Return me to the wild. Society turned me bad. Wilderness will make me glad....beautiful poem and the note on the human conscience

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