Friday, March 20, 2015

Please See Your Bright Future Comments

Rating: 4.8

I know you feel so much pain,
That it feels like there's no more to gain,
By staying in a life,
Surrounded by stress and strife.
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 12 November 2016

maybe there is some SMALL percentage of suicide-prone people who would be influenced by a poem, .........but i doubt it. not if they are SERIOUS. but i guess it doesn't hurt to try. i could say more, but why bother? ? well, i CAN'T HELP MYSELF! ! ! if someone were to say this to me as i was about to plunge the knife, i would say i CAN'T WAIT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! . : In a thousand years your worries will not matter, ...................my WORRIES are NOW! ! ! ! ! bri: (: ( but the hug and ideas for seeking music (not suicide music!) and pleasant pictures and friends are 'nice' IF ONE HAS ACCESS TO SUCH THINGS! !

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Mohammad Skati 21 March 2015

What a great poem! I feel real poetry. A well-done write. Thanks.

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Valsa George 21 March 2015

Everyday we hear of rising depression and people committing suicide. Perhaps a timely gesture of love, a word of consolation or an encouraging statement may help them get over a sudden wave of depression! I feel it is incumbent on us with sound mind to help our depressed friends come out of their sorry state with positive strokes! An inspiring write that brings out your humaneness, Stephen!

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Hazel Durham 21 March 2015

I love this stunning write it's so uplifting and full of hope, your beautifully written poem is a candle lit in the darkness of people who are in a bad place, to reach out and feel the love that is around them with the beauty in this world!

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Amitava Sur 20 March 2015

A thoughtful poem throwing light on the happier side of our human life... loved it

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