Saturday, January 9, 2016

Please Release Me! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crumpled papers, distorted thoughts
Incomplete poems and unshed tears.
Suffocated heart with bruised emotions,
Your empty promises embedded in that heart
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2021

A brilliant poem! I sincerely admire the voice of women in general! A thought provoking poem...top score!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

All the prophets Should bear the Crown of thorns. Terrible poem Superb, Aarzoo

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Dev Anand 07 July 2016

Did I deserve the pain I receive My God? My heart just bleeds in deep pain and agony Would you release me from worldly bonds? .. such situations as you describe is very very painful...... sorry that you had to undergo it....... we all experience that in some occasions of our lives..... only way to get free from such pain is to cry out to the Lord of heaven and earth as you cry in this poem...... like this portrayal human lived experience of treachery, insincerity. lack of love......... betrayal......... thank you dear poetess. DEV

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 January 2016

With True Love. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Pain and sorrow is part and parcel of this life, getting rid from is early the better...to carry it is like carrying donkey's load...10+++ Thought provoking poem indeed.

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