Please Read My Poetry...Again Comments

I really love this Wojja, It tells so much on who you really are and inner peace is worth so much more then looking for praise from anyone else. 10+++

Your poem could be saved and put in each letter to be sent back to them. Look at the money you could make if you could charge 25 Cents for each one of the. Great come back I believe.

I laugh aloud when I read your poem...................It is basic human nature........as one like to adorned oneself with garments so one like one's poem to adored with comments........young are like that and old people with young mind are too like that..........good write.........

You have good metre and rhyme Wojja. The best advice I can give a young poet is to learn about metre and rhyme themselves, for that is the heart of good poetry. Then read and read and read good poetry for without reading really good poetry, you cannot begin to write it.

Satirical a bit...you're a good poet10++++++++

Interesting piece I'd never looked at it in that light 10+