Saturday, June 20, 2009

Please Pay Attention Pt 1 Comments

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Pay Attention Part One

Your eyelids begin to flutter, shy morning light yearns to peek in
Savor that fleeting moment between worlds
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David Whalen
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Roseann Shawiak 23 August 2015

Really loved this one, so true that most people don't really look around them, never noticing the little things that are so important in our lives. What has happened to innate curiosity, don't people question and seek answers from their environments and surroundings? There's so much to see, it's a whole new world out there. Thank you for bringing attention to the inattention of people nowadays! Great poem! RoseAnn

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