Please Me ~make Me Dream~ Comments

beautiful dream sweet dream delighted deam like your write

beautiful dream sweet dream delighted deam like your write

Very well expressed poem full of emotion.

You go girl, he owes you.

written with a lot of pain. very well expressed.

Pause between the sobs really draws out with missing words and give us pain

Pause between the sobs really draws out with missing words and give us pain

tear never hurt tear wash, beautiful.. I have posted a poem on the same line ASHQ. you may please request my loving sister Shahzia Batool to get it translated. thnx for sharing best wishes and regards.

SEND me back give me breath give me vintage from your pain and dream Cocktail to give heart peace your piece is pleasing me with peace.. please me - make me dream i-so sweet/thanks and be blessed