Please Marry Me Poem by Asif Andalib

A fine lyric. If it is indeed intended for a loved one I'm certain she will say Yes. You could set it to music as it is so lyrical, Asif

good poem with rhythm and the pleading forms a lyric of appeal. Wwell written.

Heartfelt verse. Keep learning and going. Follow your passion.

Baby you have saved me by taking my mind. I was dying of its weight I like

Stay with me don't go away baby My heart will never let you leave me Baby you have saved me by taking my mind I was dying of its weight you are so kind......love so strong...... in deep and endearing terms you have described it my dear poet......... thank you.... tony

Really it is a beautiful poem on love having thrilling and startling expression with nice collocation. Romantic and amusing one. Metaphorically strong. It may be quoted... Switch on love's light don't be loveless My bedroom is full of darkness If you sing music will start Of the guitar in my heart Fantastic. Thanks.10

When the heart is taken to an area by which the head naturally follows..you have love. You have the women who will be your wife. Poignant!

beautiful... please do read my poem- - Yes, I am a Poet....

A passionate and highly emotional to pop the question. I see poetry poeticized in this piece. Win! win! !

Very well expresed. Deep sentiments within words.