Saturday, March 1, 2008

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As your tears leave a path on your cheek for the next
your heart splits apart a little more

As your fingers tremble at the thought of loss
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Kathlyn Grace
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Michael Pruchnicki 01 March 2008

OK Kathlyn - some good stuff you've written, but it could use proofreading and editing (boring topics, I know, but essential that you learn and practice these skills) ! You realize you've lost me You regret what you've done You never let me see you before!

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