Please Leave Me Alone Comments

lovely poem..yes it is a satire and cynical too..a very responsible write..i wrote one 'a seed within' with a similar thought....be aware of the fixers..they might turn your neck around..you might be walking backwards...i take this into my favs

Hmmm...a little cynical for my taste, but you make your point quite well! I like the form and the repetition. -roshni.

Amen to that brother! God forbids thinking for yourself. Oh wait, isn't that the eleventh commandment they never talk about?