Tuesday, May 28, 2013

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Bit by bit
Time plays the game
how can i win
that is my aim.
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Mrs Sarojini pattayat
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Lorraine Colon 28 May 2013

This is a beautiful poem. I love the lines to discover what the floating cloud says, and what the lonely bird thinks It reminds me to be more conscious of things going on around me, not just my own little part of the world. Very nice.

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Mrs Sarojini pattayat

Mrs Sarojini pattayat

Odisha, India
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