Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Please Hold My Hand..... Comments

Rating: 4.9

Trudging along the slippery path of life,
If I ever slip to the ground,
Please extend a hand of yours,
For me to hold and turn around,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 04 February 2014

@ Aqua Flower, Yes, 'holding hands is special...'. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 February 2014

@Brianne Prestly, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here. I am glad that you've chosen this as your favorite.

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Brianne Prestly 09 September 2013

I love the image that you gave! ! Favorite poem for me! !

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2013

@ Patricia Grantham, Except in the first and the last sentence, my thoughts are echoed in your words. Thank you. Yes, a look, a touch, a smile can convey deep emotions and love. Rightly said.

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Patricia Grantham 06 September 2013

You wrote this beautifully and filled with compassion. A kind touch, a tender smile or a glance from the eyes all of these convey emotions that can be breathtaking. Even in the final hours of life they can convey a love so deep. A thoughtful write that touched my heart. Well done.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 September 2013

@ Amy De Guzman, Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem and sharing your thoughts.

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Noreen Carden 02 September 2013

We all need someone to hold our hand in this life and hopefully in the next life too well done Khairul a lovely poem and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem

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Khairul Ahsan 15 January 2019

Thank you, @Noreen Carden, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here. I've read your beautiful poem- 'Forgotten Prayer and liked it very much.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

@ Lyn Paul, I am moved by your kind words and warm appreciation.

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Amy De Guzman 01 September 2013

i am so deeply touch by your poem. its true! I can relate to the message you tried to convey.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

@ Beach Girl, Thanks for reading my poem. I am glad that you loved it.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2013

@ Mary Forrester, Thanks a lot for reading my poem, picking from the millions, and commenting on it. I am truly inspired. I am indeed glad that you found my poem touching and inspiring.

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Lyn Paul 31 August 2013

A truly beautiful poem on the slippery path of life and passing away with eternal grace. So painless, so gentle and so natural. Thank you

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Beach Girl 27 August 2013

How lovely, and very romantic. Loved it!

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Mary Forrester 27 August 2013

Found your poem touching and inspiring khairul

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2013

@ Sandra Feldman, You are so generous with compliments! THANK YOU from the core of my heart.

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Sandra Feldman 26 August 2013

Extremely and delicatly beautiful like a fleur de lis and extremely sad, the ending, the separation, so touching, the way you wrote, so poetically visual, I cried..........

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Khairul Ahsan 22 August 2013

@ Sekharan Pookkat and Shaziya Shaik, Thanks for your inspiring words.

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 August 2013

Very beautiful and inspiring poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2013

@Lonnie Taylor and Unwritten Soul, Thanks for your comments. I am inspired.

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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2013

If winter around, not sticks i will burn but spell this words...it warming innerside! _SOul

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