Trudging along the slippery path of life,
If I ever slip to the ground,
Please extend a hand of yours,
For me to hold and turn around,
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@Brianne Prestly, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here. I am glad that you've chosen this as your favorite.
I love the image that you gave! ! Favorite poem for me! !
@ Patricia Grantham, Except in the first and the last sentence, my thoughts are echoed in your words. Thank you. Yes, a look, a touch, a smile can convey deep emotions and love. Rightly said.
You wrote this beautifully and filled with compassion. A kind touch, a tender smile or a glance from the eyes all of these convey emotions that can be breathtaking. Even in the final hours of life they can convey a love so deep. A thoughtful write that touched my heart. Well done.
@ Amy De Guzman, Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem and sharing your thoughts.
We all need someone to hold our hand in this life and hopefully in the next life too well done Khairul a lovely poem and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem
Thank you, @Noreen Carden, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here. I've read your beautiful poem- 'Forgotten Prayer and liked it very much.
@ Lyn Paul, I am moved by your kind words and warm appreciation.
i am so deeply touch by your poem. its true! I can relate to the message you tried to convey.
@ Beach Girl, Thanks for reading my poem. I am glad that you loved it.
@ Mary Forrester, Thanks a lot for reading my poem, picking from the millions, and commenting on it. I am truly inspired. I am indeed glad that you found my poem touching and inspiring.
A truly beautiful poem on the slippery path of life and passing away with eternal grace. So painless, so gentle and so natural. Thank you
@ Sandra Feldman, You are so generous with compliments! THANK YOU from the core of my heart.
Extremely and delicatly beautiful like a fleur de lis and extremely sad, the ending, the separation, so touching, the way you wrote, so poetically visual, I cried..........
@ Sekharan Pookkat and Shaziya Shaik, Thanks for your inspiring words.
@Lonnie Taylor and Unwritten Soul, Thanks for your comments. I am inspired.
If winter around, not sticks i will burn but spell this words...it warming innerside! _SOul
@ Aqua Flower, Yes, 'holding hands is special...'. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here.