Sunday, April 30, 2017

Please Hold My Arms When I Am Walking Comments

Rating: 5.0

A win overshadowing thousand defeats,
A kiss while driving on the front seats,
Your moves in love and my counter moves,
Careless! If the kiss anyone reproves.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2018

Marvelous write that captures the eternality of love, care and support for loved ones. How wonderful to see, who despite old age could enjoy each other's company, extend support and tender loving care.This is every man's wish. Very heartwarming poem.10

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Loke Kok Yee 05 June 2017

You have put the feelings of all those in their twilight years into this amazing poem. How fortunate are those who have a companion with them as they age. Tank you sir

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But sometimes somehow somewhere, We can steal a moment here or there, With a hand in hand we can walk at least! Just as Valsa has commented, i repeat, that in the evening of our life, what we need most, is a soft touch, an assurance and a loving companion to hold the hand. Akhtar Sahab, a touching poem that deserves 100+++

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Valsa George 01 May 2017

I need a companion I need your talks, Be close and listen to when I am talking. Please hold my arms when I am walking. This is everyone's wish, especially in the later years of one's life..... to have a companion to talk to and hold hands with! Though years have lapsed by, what has been dear in the heart still stays dear! Beautiful write!

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