Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Please Help Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hits are coming down harder
My bruises become darker
And the screams which were once loud
Now becomes whimpers
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Laura Hollan
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Kelly Allen Vinal 06 September 2006

Painful and powerful - I hope it is vicarious...

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William Jackson 05 September 2006

Good poem, but if this is truly confessional, get out of there and never look back. Get out. You are worth so much more and deserve gentleness and kindness.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 September 2006

Life will show you the road where you intend to go?

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