Monday, July 18, 2011

Please Help Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please help me to continue this life
Without you it’s the end off my life
You gave me hope when no body could
You made me alive again in this life
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Omar Hatem
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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