Friday, May 6, 2016

Please God Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please God, can you just put me through?
I'd like to talk to Mom.

I know she's up there somewhere near.
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 09 May 2016

A beautiful poem in the memory of a mother. The loss of a mother is poignantly captured.

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Barry Middleton 09 May 2016

Thanks Nosheen. Glad you liked it.

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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2016

This is incredible. Seeking mom's guidance from the other world through God's intervention: She listened to my tales of woe she'll tell me what to do.

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Barry Middleton 07 May 2016

Thanks for the appreciation and the comment.

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Kim Barney 06 May 2016

A different take on a Mother's Day poem. I like it! Would love to talk to my mother the same way.

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