Sunday, August 23, 2020

Please, Give Me Love.... Comments

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please, don't give me peaches
the peaches are too sweet to be true

please, don't give me smiles
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 September 2020

Thank you so much dear Asimji for your thoughtfull responses so true! You captured my poem so well and exactly what I mean. God's Blessings, Asimji

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 September 2020

Thank you so much dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your valuable precious response. God resides in our caring heart, exactly right, Sir. God's Blessings

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 September 2020

Thank you so much dear Varsha for your ardent introvert response. I most appreciate that. God's Blessings

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M Asim Nehal 23 August 2020

To ask for lending shoulder is greater and bigger than all wealth on earth. Only those who love snd care will do that. During this corona time people are scared to touch, shake hands, give hug hence it become more so special when someone offer his or her shoulder. A thoughtful Poem. 100++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2020

Love needs good deeds. Love really needs no word. We have to beautify life with dignity and righteousness. True love comes from God.Every soul loves lean in the arm of God. Inner feeling is expressed well in this splendid poem. Unconditional and selfless love motivates life with greater responsibility. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Varsha M 23 August 2020

This is really a very good expression. A very emotional and real expression. Every one should read. Thank-you for these words.

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