Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Please Forgive Me. Comments

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If I could
Move the mountains,
Split wine from fountains.
I would
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Mishack Mchunu
fate Mountains
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Cristina Teodor 09 May 2011

So brilliant. You used 'could', 'would', ' can't', 'won't', each one in a single verse and not followed by something else, to emphasize the willingness or the powerlessness. Great metaphor 'in the pool of adoration wasnt a good sailor' to direct atention of accepting the limitations of life and relationship. Great poem..Cristina Teodor

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