Monday, October 6, 2008

Please Dont Make Me Do This Comments

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Please don't make me do this,
Take the knife to my arms,
Seeing the blood flowing down my skin,
I tried to be strong,
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Alice Winters
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Eben S - J 09 October 2008

i really like this poem can't count the times i felt this way but gotta keep trying to get through. Try take each day as a new chance. I don't know if i'm doing anything right or wrong as its my first day using poemhunter so could i ask you to read mine and tell me what you think?

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Michael Shaffer 06 October 2008

You are not alone Alice feeling this way. Writing has always help me release my despair as well as my joy. Keep writing and hang in there.

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E L 06 October 2008

Oh I am so feeling you. Sometimes we all feel this self doubt. Don't let life knock you and your wonderful talent of expression. Thank you for sharing. For the record screaming so helps ;)

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