Thursday, October 18, 2012

Please Don'T Mind Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Baby, long time no see! '
Is this word worth to give you goosies?
In my own oasis, a wooden desk,
A wraith of drought'd been staying, So Bad!
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 August 2018

Write comment. Nice piece, Eindaray. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Phanice Wamukota 07 January 2014

mmh, good one Eindaray! YOU ARE GONNA BE ONE GREAT POET

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 November 2013

Aha yor poetpen chum, wow creative ideas poem! Kudos to yor quill poetics.

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Richard Jarboe 10 March 2013

Been a while since I read your work. You represent your generation well. Take care, ric

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Sun Shine 26 November 2012

nice poem..........keep it up! !

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Aung Si 29 October 2012

Would you like to create stunning poesy? Even machismo murmurs, 'Sedate Peri! ' Nib will penetrate cells of cute skin. All u need is just regard us as own siblings.

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Elena Sandu 26 October 2012

How beautiful and sweet! The end of the poem came as a big surprise a great joy! Thank you!

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So Close 22 October 2012

great work dr....its just amazing and excellent....! ! good job... »so close«

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Ketan Hukare 21 October 2012

I don't mind you sharing such a wonderful piece Great!

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Hans Vr 19 October 2012

Poetry; sometimes we have this drought. But than a flood comes our way. The verses are sometimes just in the air; all we have to do is opening our mind and our heart. Then they pour in. A wonderful poem, Eindaray. Keep it up.

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Eindaray Kyaw 10 August 2018

It's been 6 years that i've been in a drought nothing comes out of my mind..may be my soul is dead asleep..i can't wake it up...I feel so weird and can't believe that I am the one who wrote thesee...now i'm hopeless xD

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 October 2012

Good and lovely with nice meaning. your poem here is so new and fragrant. i enjoy reading this beautiful art. Ellias

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Saeed Jan 19 October 2012

wow... Lovely... partner pen... Nice expressions, every line's superb... Sonorous effect, enchanting one.... brilliant write, good luck

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Asif Andalib 19 October 2012

Lovely poem. Enjoyed it

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2012

Such a nice lines done here, well done Eindaray and i dont mind to read a good poem because it just fine..keep it up_Soul

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Elena Sandu 19 October 2012

The poem is melodious with a nice rhythm misterious and intriguing. Enjoyed the read thank you for share.

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Nader Baheri 19 October 2012

Your poems always have the wonderful endings.hope u r poetic soul always be survived. muchas gracias for sharing and u r invitation.

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