Friday, November 28, 2008

Please Don'T Kill The Blowfish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went for a walk today
river glimmering lights,
winds whispering, brushing by
It was such a nice day
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Charmaine Sinclair
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Barry A. Lanier 24 February 2009

I enjoyed the metaphor and personification and the suspense of the theme and the tragedy as it might correlate with the human experience......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Your descriptions of Blowfish here could be anythin...........even human.Well, your poetic touch is really sharp, i must say.Well done Charmaine.

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