Friday, August 23, 2013

Please Don'T Kill Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

On the slopes of the mountains
The pine trees - looking so swell
The breeze through them seems to be singing
The birds look so happy and well
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Dipy Hermonite
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

great great sharing keep it up..!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Dis world is not meant to b paradise so God doesnt supervise evrything in d way He wants. He lets man kill n destroy in his freewill so dat he is judged n tested in d next world. So your poem was so great and hardhitting. Both on environmental n human scales.

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Delbert Hilling 29 September 2013

I wonder myself....? ? ? ? ? where can he be when children so young are sick? ? And this World's evil way's seem to overpower all innocence!

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Delbert Hilling 29 September 2013

I wonder myself....? ? ? ? ? where can he be when children so young are sick? ? And this World's evil way's seem to overpower all innocence!

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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2013

a nice write stop killing the trees its time to leave them alone

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Aloke Mukherjee 28 August 2013

Yes, it is more than killing a tree! You have conveyed the message effective, the killers inside us is to be killed. A poem with good cadence and diction.

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Aloke Mukherjee 28 August 2013

Simple, with good cadence, full of pity and love, we can hear the cry of hapless tree!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 August 2013

A tree is helpless and cannot go anywhere. Man keeps chopping trees and it leads to global warming. Drought conditions will appear.One keeps repenting later. Beautiful poem.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 24 August 2013

We need nature.every single tree, every single person in this world. It's not our making its Gods making. But as I said In your other poem God gave us a choice. We are doing the harm, not him. It's our greed and ignorance and cruelty. Think down to earth. Man choose to destroy himself. Not even God can stop him. There are so many gods in this world and they are all giving man a hand to destroy this world and himself Keep writing. Keep sending your prayer to the one God. He sees everything. He Knows everything. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Patricia Grantham 23 August 2013

We have to live and commune with nature. A tree is very important to nature its leaves refreshes the air and the fruits that it bears are for nourishment. It has many other uses: wood for houses, paper to write on, a haven for birds and animals also for helping with soil erosion. When one dies its a loss. An inspiring write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 August 2013

Where is God at such moments When the helpess turn to Him and cry Where does He go, oh do tell me When their echoes fade out and they die the most pertinent question ever! a touching poem, Dipy.

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Dave Walker 23 August 2013

Nature lives and breathes with us. A great poem.

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