Sunday, March 3, 2013

'Please Don't Give Up' Comments

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Your needed here... Please don't give up..
You have an offering to pass on to others like you.
You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew.
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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

This poem carries a good piece of advice... appreciated!

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Shahzia Batool 12 April 2013

this can be framed and saved for the daily read! ! !

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Colin Bradley 23 March 2013

Beautifully inspiration for all to read

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 10 March 2013

when I imagine the scene depicted in this poem, it is so perfect! an interesting poem for youngsters, who are in trouble!

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Valsa George 10 March 2013

Have an indomitable spirit and never give up! There can be once again sunshine in life! ! A very inspirational write!

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Mark Dillon 09 March 2013

Beautiful, inspirational, warm and well written lyn.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 March 2013

Not to give up and to believe that we all have some thing special in us is a great philosophy! Loved the beautiful write and the summing up is creditable.

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Unwritten Soul 04 March 2013

I love this line You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew...and the message with the note just great for all people to read, understand and take_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 04 March 2013

Great philosophy Lyn - we all need to feel that we have something of value to offer? I believe in this philosophy, but it is often difficult to actually live it. Well penned.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 03 March 2013

Your message is truly encouraging. As there is rain and sunshine - both needed- the same is necessary to be recognized and accepted in people's daily life. Through determination, inner strength, faith, one should believe There is a new tomorrow! Lovely message. Good luck! Maria

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