Your needed here... Please don't give up..
You have an offering to pass on to others like you.
You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew.
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when I imagine the scene depicted in this poem, it is so perfect! an interesting poem for youngsters, who are in trouble!
Have an indomitable spirit and never give up! There can be once again sunshine in life! ! A very inspirational write!
Not to give up and to believe that we all have some thing special in us is a great philosophy! Loved the beautiful write and the summing up is creditable.
I love this line You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew...and the message with the note just great for all people to read, understand and take_Soul
Great philosophy Lyn - we all need to feel that we have something of value to offer? I believe in this philosophy, but it is often difficult to actually live it. Well penned.
Your message is truly encouraging. As there is rain and sunshine - both needed- the same is necessary to be recognized and accepted in people's daily life. Through determination, inner strength, faith, one should believe There is a new tomorrow! Lovely message. Good luck! Maria
This poem carries a good piece of advice... appreciated!