if you do all that
lovemaking
whilst you two
are alive
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but don't die before me please I'd love to hear some one crying for me.............. a true lover always thinks like this. An impressive poem.
A beautiful love poem. Tender feelings of love are expressed beautifully in this write. To think of lovers parted by death is a very sad thing. But i'm sure love goes beyond physical boundaries. The concept of eternal love pleases the heart.
kindness Nosheen Irfan how much lovely comments to poets do mean Thanks
Nice advice to stop in matured solution, thank you.