Please Don'T Cut Yourself... Comments
I know you cut yourself.
And deep inside my heart
Cries out for you.
I feel your pain
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What a radiant yet ensuring way to send your message to one disturbed soul through smooth soothing whispering poetic lines! Great piece Luz.10/10
Hi Kesav, so nice to see you again. Thank you so much for your comment. I hope you're doing well. Sending lots of good wishes.
I vote your beautiful poem 10/10.......Hope, you can understand my sentiment!
Hi Luz, I had no intention to trouble you! But I sincerely request you to be a good critic and try to offer constructive criticisms! Poem of just 4 lines might have fathomless beauty...interpret things in the right way! By the way this is a beautiful work of yours! Stay blessed!
Wow! This is your standard! You are certainly neither a good poet nor a good human being. You derive pleasure by inflicting pain on other! I must identify whose representative you are? Come on read my top poems. You are welcome
" You are certainly neither a good poet nor a good human being" You're entitled to your opinion. I'm sorry you miss understood my poem. Good luck to you.
I don't think you have understood my little work in the right way!
Thank you for sharing dear Luz, it is a great read. I think we all need to read this poem as it makes us more aware of the pain of others. Sending love to those who are in such pain and hope they will soon heal and find a path towards a peaceful soul and self love.
Thank you Elena, I wrote this with a certain young girl in mind. Hope it helps any here that might be going through this painful habit.
An insightful poem on self harm. A wonderfully written poem dear Luz.
I pray at night His guiding light will clear your mind, your way, Heal your heart, And free your soul from such a wicked snare, at last......, ..fine
I pray at night His guiding light will clear your mind, your way, Heal your heart, And free your soul from such a wicked snare, at last... ... ....beautiful dear poet
(cont.) i befriended a 20 year old man once; he lived in a New York State mental hospital building before prescription drugs and group homes and the state's desire to cut cost emptied the building (1000 beds) , now vacant, needing asbestos abatement. he cut himself, saying voices told him to do it. he'd been 'ill' since childhood i believe. bri ;)
The poem is a plea worth trying, but drugs (prescribed) or some other therapy might be more successful. to MyPoemList. and here is a comment i tried to send during the period you were not receiving comments from my because of 'somethin' i'd said': bad, bad bri! : ( but, Yay! , now i am forgiven. thanks. (cont.)
It's a mental abnormality, a few persons seek pleasure by giving pain to themselves. You have a nice heart to feel her abnoramlity and write a poem on her.
Thank you for your comment. I wrote this thinking of a daughter of a woman I used to know. I never showed them the poem. But I hope that any young person who does this will take notice of it some day.
That short futile relief Self mutilation brings, Your tortured soul, Oh! wasted blood, Ungodly act, This wrong belief. free yourself from such belief and be pure and think of your divine nature that comes from God to you as a gift. tony
Thank you for your comment. I wrote this about a friend's daughter who used to cut herself.
A motivational poetry... Love it...1000+++....I would like you read my poem Depression I hate you.... Naila
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7/18/2025 11:05:19 PM # 1.0.0
as a cutter, i think if i read this poem again when i am down, i won't do it
Leeann, thank you for sharing about you and commenting.