Please Dad Comments

Fantastic poem, Angee! Poignant, intense, brought tears to my eyes and tugged at my heart strings! Beautifully and well written poem, I love it! Thank you for sharing your loss and heart, very meaningful poem! Know that your Dad still says he's proud of you! Thank you very much for sharing this poem! RoseAnn

My emotions undisciplined. I can't get up although I try, Please don't be upset if I cry. Though I can't fight what I can't see, Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me........it is so difficult to forget especially whenhe is no more with us... lovely theme with powerful message.... i loved it....10 read mine..papa do u know? ? ? ? ? papa you two....o, mother

This poem is so strong so much emotions is held it this poem. You did such an amazing job writing it. well done

OMGoodness.... very strong emotions put in this poem... i enjoyed reading this though it made me wanna cry. keep it up! :)

Awesome write, really enjoyed it. Thankyou so much for sharing :)

This is really good. Very well written

this is a really sad poem... i wanted to cry when i read it... good job!

wow... This is so sad. I felt like crying. Your use of words strongly express your emotions. You are a brilliant poet.