If you could believe me please
my pain is so pure
Even the thought of hurting you
hurts me several times more.
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A love story describe in word...Last few line is simply awsum...well written and keep it up...
very nice... really touching... ' How could i hurt the heart whom i loved like such Please come back home I miss you so much.'
What a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it, and though this poem a sad, love poem there was a line that, for me, seemed to less the pain. 'A night without you was like darkness which was dumb.' I really liked reading this poem and I can't wait to read the others.
Narration of emotion with intensity of deep hope and love. Something sad and some hidden wish was pouring into a beautiful poem. Well done...! ! !
When you know you were of me an inseparable part. Very nice lines, such a beautiful poem!
Very romantic and the pain is evident from each and every word., Great!