Please Poem by Emily Torres

Please



please dont tell me its over
please tell me you still care
please tell me you go to sleep
wishing i was there
i cant go on without you
even breathings getting hard
baby cant you understand
you my shining star (:
i know ive made mistakes
and i know i broke your heart
but give me a chance to fix it
a chance for anotehr start
my love for you still stays strong
even when were apart
so please tell me you'll consider it
a chance to mend your heart ♥

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Williams 07 October 2009

I don't care much for the emoticons or the absence of punctuation. However, this poem has a good, steady rhythm, and I do like the images.

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