Thursday, July 31, 2008

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Rating: 4.5

for everything i've done to you
that; s ever hurt you
in any possible way
i'm very sorry for it
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danielle bennett
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silver phoenix 31 July 2008

You need some practice, but this poem is so sincerely written it touches ones heart without you being the greatest expert.9/10 Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two. If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3. Thankyou, Kilian

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Chris Newlash 31 July 2008

Great poem, read some of mine you might like them!

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