Saturday, September 20, 2008

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Can people please stop driving cars;
Screeching on striped, glossy roads.
On mother earth’s bare skin we have made scars,
By those rugged tyres that scorch.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Niamat Ali Murtazai 03 March 2012

A very beautiful, pleasing poem each line of which seems to be a lesson.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

Very lovely the last staza. Love it.

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Waqas Naeem 20 September 2008

wonderfully said! All we do is act upon lies, Or things that would waste her, In nuclear sighs. well done and keep writing....

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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