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A kind request is done to hold hand in tender love twisting solitude. Sometimes you feel that you fall down but in love you feel that you are not lonely and you have got companion and friend has caught your hand. This is an excellent poem.10

Wonderful work.Engenders feelings of protection and concern.

.......................poignant and beautifully written by a mature mind. Cheers, Jerry

your heartprint, touching love poem, thanks for sharing

My heart complains Please! Listen to my scream! great lines... people will hear just wait and see.good job. Crystal

awwwwwwww. that's so cool. thats how i write when i want a great friend to be there for me when i need a hand to hold. :) nice poem! ! ! brittany

fantastic poem i add- MORE PLEASE :)

' i wanna hold your hands..........i wanna hold your hands ' there goes the famous song from the Beetles.Hopin someones would be with you soon to kill your loneliness.Nice works Bastos.

Lighting a candle to brighten your world...lovely but so heartfelt...thank you