Thursday, December 28, 2006

Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

'get together! ! '
we're just friends and
satisfied here.
Let It Rest Please
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Landrey
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 29 December 2006

Before I comment on this incredible poem, I have a question: Did you mean to use the word 'ex-perience' like you did in the 3rd stanza... sort of hinting at what might happen if you rushed into a relationship (ex..) ? If you did, that's some great usage of broken up words, landrey! This poem conveys very relevant emotions, and I give it a 9.99987872. For convenience sake, I'm making it a 10. -bandy

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