Saturday, December 20, 2014

Pleasantries (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fly like a kite in the passion of storms,
Why don't you love and enjoy its charms.
Sink yourself in the ocean of two eyes,
Life is between two lovely soft arms.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2022

It's a wonderful Ghazal...loved it. Top score! !

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 December 2015

I enjoyed its optimism and its message.Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 22 December 2015

This is indeed a massive ghazal with a lasting message of love specially at the onset of Christmas for which I would like to thank you a hundred times, Sir. What can be nobler than wishing- It's eve of Christmas bid farewell to the arms.

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Sarmad Mirza 24 December 2014

very beautifully composed A great message too :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 December 2014

Very nice Ghazal composed beautifully with a great message of love on the eve of Christmas........10

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Valsa George 21 December 2014

Love is what the world needs! As Christmas is at our doorstep when we celebrate the birth of Jesus who taught the world to love even the enemies, let us say farewell to the arms! A beautiful Ghazal!

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 December 2014

A beautiful Ghazal.................10

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