Friday, September 8, 2006

Pleasantly Annihilated By Your Magical Presence Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re a young sprite
Making your way through the city
Goddess-like along subway trains
Causing tremulous hearts to palpitate
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Uriah Hamilton
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Goldy Locks 02 January 2007

beaucoup de your titles are FANtastic. i'd like to see vous delve more into repetition, U, believe you have a natural flare; it's the lyrical syntazznesss. soin, Sus

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 September 2006

URIAH...LIKE THIS A LOT, ESPECIALLY THE TITLE...(SOMETHING THE HEAP MIGHT HAVE EXPLORED ON) Stellar Imagery and Smooth even-flow throughout...A Fine Penning'''''''''''''''FJR

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Sandra Fowler 08 September 2006

A wonderfully original title. The poem is pure magic as usual. Write on, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra

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