You’re a young sprite
Making your way through the city
Goddess-like along subway trains
Causing tremulous hearts to palpitate
...
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URIAH...LIKE THIS A LOT, ESPECIALLY THE TITLE...(SOMETHING THE HEAP MIGHT HAVE EXPLORED ON) Stellar Imagery and Smooth even-flow throughout...A Fine Penning'''''''''''''''FJR
A wonderfully original title. The poem is pure magic as usual. Write on, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra
beaucoup de your titles are FANtastic. i'd like to see vous delve more into repetition, U, believe you have a natural flare; it's the lyrical syntazznesss. soin, Sus