Sunday, July 20, 2008

Pleasant Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

A holiday, a holiday,
a real chance to get away.
To catch a plane, a boat, a train,
or cruise on down the inside lane.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 23 May 2009

A wonderful rhythmic piece Ernestine. I could sense the beat of the train heading towards the coast. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 29 July 2008

Taken it easy seems to be the dish of the day, and this poem is no exception, relax, sit back and let Ernestine do the talking Great Poem Ernestine Thankyou for shring it Love duncan

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Kesav Easwaran 29 July 2008

a bright poem to inspire one's holidaying thoughts....beautiful rhyming...carpenter precise cut poem structure...ten votes

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Anong All 20 July 2008

Ah, sounds like something i need, well not the wii, but the vacation!

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