Pleasant Journey Comments

Like this, a really good poem. Great write.

This is a very nice poem, A 10+++ The heights, the depths and meditation covering everything in between, so nice. Very well done.

It is a pleasant write though the realistic journey will see you in adventures and threats, miseries and losses.You will somehow win when you can manage disasters as something obvious for the price to pay for your goal.Nice feelings depicted in the poem overall..

You took the reader on a ' pleasant journey' to discover the 'heaven's full moon' on the height of the sky, or feeling the 'pulse of depth'of ocean, places with' peace and solace' that open a 'path of holy belief'.Beautiful penned and peaceful..Cristina Teodor

I like your deep thoughts of life reflected in your poems.nice reading..Thank you.

There, rests a bed of precious coral reds And a heap of worldly wealth willfully smiles The holy water gently kisses By sprinkling pearls everywhere on my face Greets me to feast and rule the sea But I modestly say I came only to feel the pulse of depth! Speachless! Such beauty as I see in those words can only help to grow one's soul. I could read them over and over again and never bore. Thank you for share dear friend, wish I could give you more than ten.

Dearest Rekha, How your words painted a very wonderful painting for your flying diving. Where, rests endless blue pop On which only angels smile And dances to the heavenly harp. I can see all of that alive on one of painting. There, rests a bed of precious coral reds And a heap of worldly wealth willfully smiles The holy water gently kisses By sprinkling pearls everywhere on my face Thanks a lot for all those romantic which will help me to paint them.

Great work. I love it! Mine similar to this. Enjoy it. Lying on the Big Blue Lying on the big blue, I float on the summer sea With some lonely pleasure no others can see. Smiling at the clouds which are laughing at me, I wonder what anything else paradise could be. Lying on the big grey, I float on the world sea With some wandering pleasure no others can see. Smiling at the crowds, who are too busy to hear me, I wonder what anything else heaven could be. -from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA

And I wish to seek joy and relief Moving in the path of holy belief! This path is indeed a joy of meditation

anologically written, well written. shan

nice poem, enjoyed it. full marks.