Friday, February 19, 2016

Plea To The Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found in you all the stars of the night
If you went away, my life would be black
All my words would dry up, my voice cracked
No raindrops would fall on my heart
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2021

Beautiful, just beautiful! Loved reading this sweet poem.5 stars

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2017

I understand this poem as an address to love. The strong desire; that love should dominate the life and fill the human heart completely so that no space is left for hate; is nicely penned in this beautiful poem.

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So compelling! So creative! So complete. Wow! It is pregnant with passion and loaded with love that is so awesome. Well done my friend. I will add this to my poem list....

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Valsa George 19 February 2016

An ardent plea of a loved one.....! It embodies within it all the genuineness of true passion! Don't go away...... stay... stay.....ay....y! Its echoes cannot die out! !

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Abhilasha Bhatt 19 February 2016

A wonderful poem....loved it....thank you for sharing :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 19 February 2016

The fear of your love walking away kills the person bit by bit... When you love you want that person to be with you till eternity. Beautifully described fear of losing the love of your life. One more beautiful perl from your treasure Nosheen.10+++

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Barry Middleton 19 February 2016

Very beautiful love poem. You capture the anxieties that often come with love.

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

And a plea to the life and soul as well. Abhi na jao chodkar ke dil abhi bhara nahi....Aur pyar se kabhi dil bharta bhi nahi.....Wonderful poem.....100+++

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

someone whom you love and you fear that dear one would leave you. Your love and want of your loved one company till eternity. Great Piece of work Nosheen.

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