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love the simple joy this brings

Oh Jacqui! This is an awesome song. If you sing this song in-front of me, i will stop everything thing including breath to give one complete attention..... 'I want to share a joke, but your face is a frown. Curiously, I continue to poke, turning myself into a clown.' Your poem has A - Z, right to left, north to south, east - west! it is even spread horizontally and vertically in the air! Be strong! Don't think wrong! Hope for the best! 10+++ + :) :) :)

This is a beautiful piece of work Jacqui...I love ho you transformed the mood from sad and almost anoying (Line 1-4) to happy and full of love (The last two lines) . love must always come at the end.... Wow! i like it!