Monday, January 30, 2017

Playing With My Sentiment Comments

Rating: 4.8

What a torment!
I wanted to love you with my soul
But you chose to play with my sentiment
As if it was an instrument
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Rosie Bourget
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2020

An incisive write. Hard hitting lines that depict betrayal. Yes, a great woman like you does not deserve a man who lives with lies. Leaving him is a wise decision. A well thought out write very well conveyed.

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Tom Allport 30 January 2017

a good poem about the feelings one has had in a relationship.

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