Wednesday, February 7, 2024

Playing With My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my hand, like sand why you slip away
O my dreams, why do you fly like a kite astray
with every gust of wind when you soar
I keep longing and wanting more
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2024

p/s This poem, could be a song! ..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 February 2024

I apologise for not reading this brilliant poem. I was mourning my dog TFS

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2024

This is just glowing with beauty, awe and inspiration! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2024

Oh, This is ever so heart touching! .. Capturing the heart of every child and ! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2024

Absolutely love this! .. This is so deeply deeply beautiful! ... Magnificent! ..

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Nabakishore Dash 07 February 2024

Fabulous write.But can u catch? The dreams are sure to vanish when one wakes up.

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Poetic Sky 07 February 2024

I too like to play with my dreams.

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Anjandev Roy 07 February 2024

This is an absolute gem.... thank u....my friend..

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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