Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Playing With Fire Comments

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I am a weird boy in wacky clothes,
I know fire bending since my birth.
When I was a mere child,
I started playing with fire,
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Jayeeta Shamsul
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Jayeeta Shamsul 29 March 2014

Thanks Mr. Mahur for your comment. I am a bit too imaginative by nature. Plz read my other poems too.

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Jayeeta Shamsul 29 March 2014

Thanks Mr. Mahur for commenting on my poem. I am happy that you liked the poem. Plz read my other poems too.

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V P Mahur 29 March 2014

Dear Jayeeta, I have never seen so elaborate description of fire. it is welcomed if it burns away the garbage of inhuman feelings. Nicely written. great imagination. Thanks and please reply

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