Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Playing In The Park Comments

Rating: 5.0

Near the banks of the Nile
I walked in the park
and came across a group
of schoolgirls, teenagers.
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Paul Hansford
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Susan Jarvis 01 October 2009

The word 'extremists' slices through this pure and gentle gesture of humanity like a murderous blade. This beautiful yet stark poem serves to focus fearful minds in an age of fear and terrorism. S :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2008

THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN PEOPLE SEMMS TO BE PLAYING HAVOC- WHERE AS A CASUAL PLAY IN THE PARK, A SMILE ON THE FACE WITH THEIR EYES LIT BRINGS EVEREYBODY CLOSER, LOVELY POEM

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Rani Turton 23 December 2008

These random meeting with people from so far away mean lot...and they'll keep you in their memory, never fear. Lovely recitation of an encounter.

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