Friday, September 1, 2006

Playing Chess. Comments

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It was in the night
that awkward
darkness covered
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Goldy Locks 02 February 2007

i'd rather want to see you keep each verse - the same number of lines. i mean, it's still awesome. beginning -> end, development was all there. rock out -~- sjg

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