Playing Away Comments
If you were to strip the canvass away,
scrape the surface a little,
you may see a different picture.
Errant parents, drinking, gambling,
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Could I have been insane after reading this poem the first time? ? ? ! ! ! Now I 'love' it, almost as much as I 'love' you, Ruth. : ))) NOW I give it ***** and make it a FAVORITE.
I'm not sure that I understand the last two lines, but..........MY GOD, (if a God exists) , how could my 'reading' today make me enjoy this poem SO MUCH? ? ?
Ruth, I strongly feel that this is one (one of VERY few) of your usually very fine poems which needs some changing (quite a bit) . Now I'll read another one. ;) bri
Errant means 'straying' and the parents were straying from their responsibilities and from each other as they were 'playing away' which means having illicit relationships with others over here. I don't know if you use that term where you are.
And NEITHER definition which I found online for 'errant' sounded 'right' to me. I believe you mean just plain 'BAD parents', for what it's worth. : (
(cont.) 'Canvas' is most commonly used as a noun and refers to a specific type of strong cloth used for sails, tents, and as a surface for painting.'
Yes as I was describing a painting, what I thought the painting meant, interpreting it if you like. I use metaphors quite a lot so when you say the poem needs changing, think again as you haven't understood my meaning within the metaphors. Read it more carefully, it's not straight forward
re 'canvass': ''Canvass' is most commonly used as a verb to refer to soliciting votes for an election. It can also sometimes be used as a noun to refer to a canvassing operation. (cont.)
It's been a while dear Ruth, the poetry is simply great and I thank you.
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7/21/2025 12:09:06 AM # 1.0.0
I'm glad, VERY GLAD, that I could give it FIVE STARS today, not having given it any the 'first time around'! ! ! If I had given less than ***** LAST TIME, PH would not let me vote 1,2,3,4, or five today. bri : )