Saturday, September 12, 2020

Playfulness Comments

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Playfulness

Early morning
the rain has fallen in the night
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Quoth Theraven 12 September 2020

'Look people that was a haiku.' and a fine write to bring to the brink. QtR

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

I am not a poet verse writing is for the daft with nothing to do. Look people that was a haiku.- - - - - OOPS, " poet" is 2 syllables and breaks the haiku rule! ! but since this poem is playful I'll play along- - -enjoyed your flow of thought jumping from this to that- - 10

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