*playful Night..... Comments

'Breaking the drought of intimate feelings' Rachel Ann Butler

i am impressedwith the playful night, but i wish it had lasted longer! the poem is beautifully short, iwished to see some more lines.great work.

A night of intimate darkness. To feel the silence Deep rich poem.

Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness....... Loved these lines with great poetic content and thought provoking too. CP

There is a magnificent stage set for us here We readers can feel the depth of that time and play It can take us to that height to be with the stars A play, forever to remember. Thank you. enjoyed reading it. Fast and Sweet.

Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness....... excellent interplay of imagery wrought ingenious across it deep theme,10++, thanks for sharing, keep on doing! !

brief but very meaningful..nice vivid write..awesome...10

great imagination nice work

a wonderful imagery well symbolized. i appreciate. marks 10 shan

The repetition- silence/silent- could have been avoided...good imagination in this write

Draws lovely mental pictures of love.

Subtle incantations................................

subtle and touching.. playful yet sensitive

Good Write.......... Playful Night..............

the night so inviting beauty and tranquility is beautifully described terrific piece..very excellent thoughts i love this..., very soothing 10+++

the use of adjectives and the imagery employed is in total tune with the emotion expressed...

Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness.........Your subtleness is always remarkable, Vaibhav. Best Wishes Naseer

lovely, very subtle, delicate romantic 10 Mamta

Your subtle, underpinnings of love, and romance are astute & impressive! FjR '09

dear brother pandey....... simple beautiful and entertaining lines fantastic.