Sunday, November 30, 2014

Playful Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Peeping through my window.
O you playful, ludic moon!
Tomorrow I've to wake early.
I cannot play, leave soon.
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Md. Asadullah
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Sallam Yassin 09 December 2014

Playful moon rich in emotion and passion well done Asad

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 November 2014

I call moon- A highway man or a pendant of the heaven nice poem you have composed Asad thank you

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Valsa George 30 November 2014

Moon is a temptress! As long as she is smiling her seductive smile at us, we won't be able to sleep! Closing the window will be too rude! Great imagination! Enjoyed much!

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