Friday, March 20, 2015

Played With You Comments

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You were my little child,
And I played with you.
We laughed, giggled and said boo.
We had funny fun.
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Vera Sidhwa
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I like the way you close your work out as you started it...Smart poetic employment, especially with a rhyming poem. Enjoyed the read...Bet your son will too! ~FjR~

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