Thursday, October 22, 2020

Play The Same Tune Comments

Rating: 5.0

.Play the same tune I listen to for promoting sleepiness,
My face is darkening give it a little fairness,
A number of lyrics I have added to my book of life,
Can't you come tonight to sing one of my classiness?
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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 October 2020

A well penned poem. Truly fantastic and impressive....5 stars*****

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2020

Due to hard work and tiredness your face is darkening and it needs fairness. You are feeling sleepiness and you need to listen sweet tune. Your sweet lyrical and musical tune will allow to get pleasantness in sleeping. Taking rest you can get freshness next day. This poem is beautifully and excellently penned..5 stars rating.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 October 2020

A very lovely and heartwarming poem. Sometimes our life is full of weariness and pains but someone will come along the way and make our day bright and meaningful. Beautifully crafted and well expressed poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 October 2020

Dear Akhtar Sahab, Beautiful poem full of gentle, lyrical phrases! A romantic heart that pines for the magic of a smiling face. The soft touch of pathos adds to the emotional intensity of the poem. If this is a translation then, it surely must be a magical poem in beautiful Urdu language. 5 stars and more.....

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