Thursday, June 18, 2009

Play Me Like A Piano Comments

Rating: 4.7

Wind me up and watch me go,
Play me like a piano,
Touch and play every key,
Press down the ivory.
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Chris Newlash
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can you play me like a cello? : p very nice read.: D

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Courtney Carrots 22 June 2009

wow this is very beautiful. you've made a beautiful creation. -courtney

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Surya . 22 June 2009

shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya

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Surya . 22 June 2009

shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya

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Laila lili 19 June 2009

Mmm........it is very nice and its expression very strong and it touches my soul keep on your writting laila lili

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Alf Hutchison 19 June 2009

Hello Chris...this has rhyme and rhythm and flows well...I enjoyed it very much.. thanks for the invite...Cheers Alf

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Patrick McFarland 19 June 2009

Very well metered Chris. Rhyming go with piano and key with ivory for example show a sense of maturity I would expect from an older, more experienced writer. Good job.

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Aamnah Akhtar 19 June 2009

if this is not poetry somebody show me some.. spectacular, no exaggerations...

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, , , , , , 19 June 2009

ahh that's fully awesome i love the rhyth to it

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this is actualy good, which suprises me... Zane, or should i call your Mr. begger?

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